Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích"Some human activities have negative effects on plant and animal species. Some people think it is too late to do anything about this problem while others think effective measures can be taken to improve this situation. Discuss both views and give our opinion"IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Paper-based 28/5/2022)

Some human activities have negative effects on plant and animal species. Some people think it is too late to do anything about this problem while others think effective measures can be taken to improve this situation. Discuss both views and give our opinion

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Dạng discuss both views thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé
• Dạng discuss both views có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Viết về quan điểm Some people think it is too late to do anything about this problem
    • Main idea: Any species of plants and animals have already disappeared from our world, and it is impossible to get them back  (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: it is futile to save the weak species unless these species themselves are able to continue their life)  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng từ "species" tiếng anh
      • Supporting idea: 
        • In 2013, a United Nations study found out that several species disappeared from our ecosystem because of deforestation
        • They even point out that even if we bring them back, there is no room for them to survive today  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng động từ"survive"tiếng anh
      • Example: 
        • The south Andean toad became extinct in 1968, and the Sri Lanka legume tree died out completely in the 1980s. 
  • Body 2: Viết về quan điểm others think effective measures can be taken to improve this situation & nêu rõ mình ủng hộ quan điểm này (I insist that there are many measures that governments and individuals can take to stop the negative effect that our activities have on our planet)
    • Main idea 1: (Viết về governments) Governments around the world should come together to address this issue 
      • Supporting idea:  There are many examples of successful steps taken by the government and the NGOs to prove that if we try, we can achieve. 
      • Example: For instance, the “Royal Bengal Tiger” our national animal, was once on the verge of extinction, but with the efforts of our government and some NGOs we have succeeded in bringing up their numbers>> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Sửa bài IELTS SPEAKING PART 1-2-3 topic Work/Study(Sửa & Làm lại 4 lần - HS đạt 7.5)
    • Main idea 2: (Viết về individuals)  Individuals can also spread awareness about the destructive effect that some of our activities have on the planet
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Individuals can actively engage in spreading awareness about environmentally destructive practices, such as deforestation, overconsumption, and pollution. 
        • By sharing information through social media, community events, or educational initiatives, they contribute to the promotion of sustainable practices. 
      • Example: Research shows that grassroots movements and individual advocacy play a crucial role in driving positive environmental change.
  • IELTS TUTOR gợi ý thêm các biện pháp có thể học thêm:
    • Overexploitation of natural resources should be reduced. 
    • Hunting and smuggling of wild animals should be banned. 
    • Overgrazing and overcultivation should be stopped so that we can have sustainable development. 
    • Afforestation should be encouraged, which means planting trees where there were none before.   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  CÁCH PARAPHRASE TỪ "ADVISE" TIẾNG ANH
    • Many other steps, such as using pre-fabricated materials for doors and windows, have reduced the cutting of trees for wood
    • Governments around the world should come together to address the issue of deforestation which is the main cause of the disappearance of endangered species

IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:

Some people believe that human activities have already caused irreversible damage to plant and animal species, making any conservation efforts futile, while others argue that effective measures can still be implemented to alleviate the damage. This essay will discuss both perspectives and explain why I firmly believe that it is never too late to protect endangered species.

On the one hand, there is a belief that it is too late to reverse the catastrophic consequences (hậu quả thảm khốc) of human activities on flora and fauna. Many endangered species (loài có nguy cơ tuyệt chủng) have already become extinct due to widespread deforestation (nạn phá rừng trên diện rộng) and unsustainable industrial practices (hoạt động công nghiệp không bền vững), leaving their ecosystems irreparably damaged (tổn hại không thể khắc phục). A report by the United Nations in 2013 highlighted that numerous species vanished entirely from their natural habitats due to these destructive activities. Even if reintroduction efforts (nỗ lực tái tạo lại loài) are undertaken, critics argue that the lack of suitable habitats (thiếu môi trường sống phù hợp) and continued environmental degradation would prevent their survival. For example, the South Andean toad (cóc miền nam Andes) was declared extinct in 1968, and the Sri Lanka legume tree (cây họ đậu Sri Lanka) disappeared in the 1980s, symbolizing how some losses are indeed permanent.

On the other hand, many, myself included insist that proactive conservation measures (biện pháp bảo tồn chủ động) can still mitigate environmental harm (giảm thiểu thiệt hại môi trường) and revive endangered species (hồi sinh các loài có nguy cơ tuyệt chủng). Governments and non-governmental organizations (NGOs) (tổ chức phi chính phủ) have demonstrated that coordinated efforts (nỗ lực phối hợp) can restore biodiversity. For instance, the Royal Bengal Tiger (hổ Bengal hoàng gia), once on the brink of extinction, has seen its population rebound due to government intervention and conservation projects led by NGOs. Similarly, grassroots movements (phong trào cơ sở) have successfully raised awareness about ecologically harmful practices (hoạt động gây hại sinh thái), prompting communities to adopt more sustainable consumption habits (thói quen tiêu dùng bền vững). These examples illustrate that restoration is achievable (khả năng phục hồi có thể đạt được) if collective action is taken at both the governmental and individual levels.>> Form đăng kí giải đề thi thật IELTS 4 kĩ năng kèm bài giải bộ đề 100 đề PART 2 IELTS SPEAKING quý đang thi (update hàng tuần) từ IELTS TUTOR

In conclusion, while the loss of certain species is indeed irreversible, I strongly believe that focused conservation strategies and global cooperation can still prevent further damage and promote the revival of endangered species.

Vocabulary List:

1. Catastrophic consequences (hậu quả thảm khốc)

   • Synonyms: devastating outcomes, disastrous effects, calamitous results

   • Antonyms: minor impacts, trivial effects, negligible consequences

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: It is too late to reverse the catastrophic consequences of human activities on flora and fauna.

2. Endangered species (loài có nguy cơ tuyệt chủng)

   • Synonyms: threatened species, vulnerable species, at-risk species

   • Antonyms: thriving species, abundant species, flourishing species

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: Many endangered species have already become extinct due to widespread deforestation.

3. Widespread deforestation (nạn phá rừng trên diện rộng)

   • Synonyms: massive logging, large-scale deforestation, extensive forest clearance

   • Antonyms: afforestation, reforestation, forest preservation

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: Many endangered species have already become extinct due to widespread deforestation.

4. Irreparably damaged (tổn hại không thể khắc phục)

   • Synonyms: permanently destroyed, irreversibly harmed, critically damaged

   • Antonyms: reversible, repairable, fixable

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: Their ecosystems have been irreparably damaged.

5. Reintroduction efforts (nỗ lực tái tạo lại loài)

   • Synonyms: restoration attempts, revival initiatives, species recovery programs

   • Antonyms: extinction processes, species elimination, habitat destruction

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: Even if reintroduction efforts are undertaken, critics argue that the lack of suitable habitats would prevent their survival.

6. Proactive conservation measures (biện pháp bảo tồn chủ động)

   • Synonyms: preventive measures, anticipatory steps, forward-thinking strategies

   • Antonyms: reactive measures, passive conservation, delayed actions

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: Many insist that proactive conservation measures can still mitigate environmental harm.

7. Mitigate environmental harm (giảm thiểu thiệt hại môi trường)

   • Synonyms: reduce ecological damage, lessen environmental impact, alleviate habitat destruction

   • Antonyms: worsen ecological harm, exacerbate damage, intensify destruction

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: Proactive conservation measures can still mitigate environmental harm.

8. Grassroots movements (phong trào cơ sở)

   • Synonyms: community initiatives, local campaigns, civic movements

   • Antonyms: top-down programs, government-led projects, institutional actions

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: Grassroots movements have successfully raised awareness about ecologically harmful practices.

9. Restoration is achievable (khả năng phục hồi có thể đạt được)

   • Synonyms: recovery is possible, rehabilitation is attainable, renewal is feasible

   • Antonyms: irreversible damage, permanent loss, unachievable recovery

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: These examples illustrate that restoration is achievable if collective action is taken.

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