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Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "The bar chart below shows the average hours of housework done by women" IELTS WRITING TASK 1.

The bar chart below shows the average hours of housework done by women.

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  • Overall: Full time employed women spent lesser time on household chores than unemployed and part-time employed women, but they still worked more than their male counterparts.
  • Body 1: Women with no employment + Women with part time employment 
    • Women with no employment spent 7 hours per day in 1985 and 2005 and 6.5 hours a day in 1995.  (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: women who were jobless spent time doing housework more than others, 7 hours and it stayed stable at the end of the year 2005 after it had a little drop to 6.5 hours during 1995) >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng tính từ "stable" tiếng anh 
    • A little less time was spent by part time employed women when they spent 5.5, 5 and 6 hours per day on household chores in 1985, 1995 and 2005 respectively. 
  • Body 2: Women with full time employment + Men with full time employment 
    • Women with full time employment spent 2 hours per day in 1985, 1.5 hours per day in 1995 and 2.5 hours/day in 2005. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng từ "per" tiếng anh
    • Full time employed men spent one hour per day in 1985 and 1995 and 1.5 hours per day in 2005. 

IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:

The bar chart illustrates the average hours (thời gian trung bình) spent on household chores (công việc nhà) by women based on their employment status, as well as by men with full-time jobs (công việc toàn thời gian) from 1985 to 2005.

Overall, women who were unemployed (thất nghiệp) or worked part-time (bán thời gian) consistently spent more time on domestic tasks compared to those with full-time occupations (công việc toàn thời gian), while men remained the least involved in housework.

In 1985 and 2005, women who were jobless (thất nghiệp) dedicated an unchanged (không thay đổi) 7 hours daily to household tasks, although there was a slight dip (giảm nhẹ) to 6.5 hours in 1995. Part-time employed women spent slightly less, with 5.5, 5, and 6 hours in 1985, 1995, and 2005, respectively.>> Form đăng kí giải đề thi thật IELTS 4 kĩ năng kèm bài giải bộ đề 100 đề PART 2 IELTS SPEAKING quý đang thi (update hàng tuần) từ IELTS TUTOR

For full-time employed women, the amount of time was significantly lower (thấp hơn đáng kể), at 2 hours in 1985, dropping to 1.5 in 1995, before increasing to 2.5 hours in 2005. Meanwhile, men with full-time employment consistently contributed minimally (tối thiểu), with just 1 hour in 1985 and 1995, and 1.5 hours in 2005.

New Vocabulary Explanation

1. Average hours (thời gian trung bình) – typical amount of time spent on something

2. Household chores (công việc nhà) – tasks or duties around the house like cleaning or cooking

3. Full-time jobs (công việc toàn thời gian) – employment requiring a full workweek

4. Unemployed (thất nghiệp) – without a job

5. Part-time (bán thời gian) – employment with fewer hours than full-time

6. Full-time occupations (công việc toàn thời gian) – jobs that require full working hours

7. Jobless (thất nghiệp) – synonym for unemployed

8. Unchanged (không thay đổi) – remained the same

9. Slight dip (giảm nhẹ) – a small reduction or decrease

10. Significantly lower (thấp hơn đáng kể) – much less than something else

11. Minimally (tối thiểu) – at the lowest possible level

Synonyms and Antonyms

1. Unemployed

   • Synonyms: jobless, out of work, redundant

   • Antonyms: employed, working, occupied

2. Slight dip

   • Synonyms: minor decline, slight decrease, modest reduction

   • Antonyms: surge, increase, rise

3. Minimally

   • Synonyms: slightly, barely, marginally

   • Antonyms: substantially, significantly, considerably

Difficult Grammar Structures

1. Passive Voice for Emphasis:

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "A little less time was spent by part-time employed women..."

   • → Thời gian ít hơn một chút được dành bởi những phụ nữ làm việc bán thời gian...

   • → This structure highlights the action rather than the person doing it.

2. Reduced Relative Clause:

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "Women who were jobless → Women jobless spent time doing housework more than others."

   • → Phụ nữ thất nghiệp dành nhiều thời gian làm việc nhà hơn những người khác.

   • → This makes the sentence more concise.

3. Compound Adjectives:

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "Full-time employed men..."

   • → Những người đàn ông làm việc toàn thời gian...

   • → This is used to describe a noun more effectively.

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