Bên cạnh PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI TASK 1 VIẾT THƯ NGÀY 05/7/2020 "you are going to take a holiday and your friend agrees to stay at your house. Write a letter to him for" IELTS WRITING GENERAL MÁY TÍNH (kèm bài được sửa HS đạt 6.0 đi thi thật), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Some people think the most important thing about being rich is that it gives an opportunity to help other people. To what extent do you agree or disagree?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

Some people think the most important thing about being rich is that it gives an opportunity to help other people. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

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• Dạng opinion essay, nếu theo hướng TOTALLY DISAGREE có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY DISAGREE
    • Main idea: giving money to the poor would be a very shortsighted approach because providing education and job training is better way of helping the poor.
      • Supporting idea:
        • Many volunteers who teach children of the slum area every evening are not very rich themselves, but their commitment to community is helpful in better ways than money can do.
      • Example: 
  • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao TOTALLY DISAGREE
    • Main idea: the rich have their rights to prioritize their own self-interests above the interests of other people. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng danh từ "interest" tiếng anh
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Thanks to their hard work and smart moves, they’ve acquired a huge amount of wealth.
        • Therefore, it is easy to understand why they are uncomfortable with the idea of giving up their hard earned money. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng THEREFORE & HENCE tiếng anh
      • Example: 

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
    • Main idea: Being rich can provide individuals with the means to help others in various ways. 
      • Supporting idea: 
        • They can donate to charities and philanthropic organizations, support their family and friends financially, and invest in projects that benefit society.  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng động từ"donate"tiếng anh
        • By donating money, time, or resources, rich individuals can help address pressing social issues and improve the lives of others.
      • Example: 
        • For example, the Bill and Melinda Gates Foundation has donated billions of dollars to support global health initiatives and other causes.
        • For example, the Chan Zuckerberg Initiative, founded by Facebook CEO Mark Zuckerberg and his wife Priscilla Chan, has invested in a range of social projects, including education, healthcare, and criminal justice reform.
        • For instance, the Oprah Winfrey Foundation supports a range of initiatives, including education, healthcare, and the arts.
  • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
    • Main idea: Being rich can enable individuals to create jobs and support the economy by starting businesses, investing in startups, and providing financial support to small businesses and entrepreneurs.
      • Supporting idea: This, in turn, can benefit communities and entire regions by providing opportunities for workers and boosting local economies.  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng BENEFIT (động từ, danh từ) & BENEFICIAL
      • Example: 
        • For example, Amazon founder Jeff Bezos started his company with a relatively small investment and eventually built it into one of the world's largest employers, with over 800,000 employees worldwide.
        • For instance, billionaire investor Peter Thiel has been a major backer of several successful tech startups, including Facebook and Palantir, which have created thousands of jobs.
        • For example, the billionaire founder of Spanx, Sara Blakely, has donated millions of dollars to support female entrepreneurs through her Sara Blakely Foundation.
  • IELTS TUTOR gợi ý main idea khác: Being rich can also provide individuals with the means to create educational opportunities for others, such as funding scholarships, supporting schools and universities, and providing mentorship and training programs.

IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:

While many believe that the true value of wealth lies in the opportunity to uplift others (cơ hội nâng đỡ người khác), I completely disagree with this perspective. I argue that money is not the sole means to help others and that wealthy individuals should have the right to prioritize their own interests.

First and foremost, providing financial aid (cung cấp hỗ trợ tài chính) to the underprivileged is often a shortsighted approach (cách tiếp cận thiển cận) to solving social inequality. Rather than simply donating money, efforts should be directed towards long-term initiatives (sáng kiến dài hạn) like education and job training, which can create lasting changes. For instance, many selfless volunteers (tình nguyện viên vị tha) dedicate their time to teach children in impoverished communities (cộng đồng nghèo khó) every evening. These individuals are not wealthy, yet their contributions have a far more profound impact (tác động sâu sắc) than mere financial donations. This clearly demonstrates that making a difference in society does not always require immense wealth, but rather a genuine commitment to positive change.>> Form đăng kí giải đề thi thật IELTS 4 kĩ năng kèm bài giải bộ đề 100 đề PART 2 IELTS SPEAKING quý đang thi (update hàng tuần) từ IELTS TUTOR

Additionally, the rich have every right to prioritize their own self-interests (lợi ích cá nhân) above the expectations of others. Their wealth is often the result of years of diligent work (làm việc siêng năng) and strategic decisions (quyết định chiến lược). Consequently, it is understandable if they are hesitant to part with their hard-earned money (tiền kiếm được một cách vất vả) simply out of social obligation. The idea that the wealthy are somehow morally obligated to support others disregards their right to enjoy the fruits of their labor (thành quả lao động). Indeed, many use their financial resources to pursue personal goals and aspirations, which is entirely justifiable given the efforts invested (nỗ lực đầu tư) to achieve their wealth.

In conclusion, while wealth can undoubtedly be a tool for positive change, it is neither the only means of contributing to society nor an obligation for those who have acquired it. True impact stems from genuine effort and commitment, not just monetary contributions.

🔎 New Vocabulary and Definitions

1. opportunity to uplift others (cơ hội nâng đỡ người khác)

   • Synonyms: opportunity to empower others, chance to support others, ability to elevate others

   • Antonyms: neglecting others, overlooking others, ignoring others

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "While many believe that the true value of wealth lies in the opportunity to uplift others, I completely disagree with this perspective."

2. providing financial aid (cung cấp hỗ trợ tài chính)

   • Synonyms: granting financial assistance, offering economic support, disbursing funds

   • Antonyms: withholding aid, restricting support, limiting assistance

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "First and foremost, providing financial aid to the underprivileged is often a shortsighted approach."

3. shortsighted approach (cách tiếp cận thiển cận)

   • Synonyms: narrow-minded strategy, limited perspective, impractical method

   • Antonyms: forward-thinking approach, long-term strategy, visionary method

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "Providing financial aid to the underprivileged is often a shortsighted approach to solving social inequality."

4. long-term initiatives (sáng kiến dài hạn)

   • Synonyms: sustainable projects, permanent solutions, enduring programs

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   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "Efforts should be directed towards long-term initiatives like education and job training."

5. selfless volunteers (tình nguyện viên vị tha)

   • Synonyms: altruistic helpers, generous contributors, benevolent supporters

   • Antonyms: self-centered individuals, selfish helpers, egocentric supporters

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "Many selfless volunteers dedicate their time to teach children in impoverished communities."

6. profound impact (tác động sâu sắc)

   • Synonyms: significant influence, deep effect, lasting change

   • Antonyms: minimal impact, insignificant effect, superficial influence

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "Their contributions have a far more profound impact than mere financial donations."

7. self-interests (lợi ích cá nhân)

   • Synonyms: personal priorities, individual benefits, private interests

   • Antonyms: collective interests, public good, community welfare

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "The rich have every right to prioritize their own self-interests above the expectations of others."

8. diligent work (làm việc siêng năng)

   • Synonyms: hard work, persistent effort, dedicated labor

   • Antonyms: laziness, carelessness, negligence

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "Their wealth is often the result of years of diligent work and strategic decisions."

9. hard-earned money (tiền kiếm được một cách vất vả)

   • Synonyms: hard-fought earnings, well-deserved income, rightfully gained wealth

   • Antonyms: easy money, unearned income, inherited wealth

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "They are hesitant to part with their hard-earned money simply out of social obligation."

10. fruits of their labor (thành quả lao động)

    • Synonyms: results of their effort, rewards of their work, outcomes of their dedication

    • Antonyms: unearned benefits, undeserved rewards, inherited advantages

    • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "The idea that the wealthy are somehow morally obligated to support others disregards their right to enjoy the fruits of their labor."

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