Bên cạnh cung cấp thêm PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5), Hãy đọc kĩ PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ Public museums and art galleries are not needed because people can see historical objects and artistic works by using computers. To what extent do you agree or disagree? từng bước phân tích để nắm cách chia bố cục cũng như viết bài không sai task response nhé!
I. Đề bài
Public museums and art galleries are not needed because people can see historical objects and artistic works by using computers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
II. Từ vựng
IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:
- Obtain information about art, history or culture: Lấy thông tin về nghệ thuật, lịch sử và văn hóa
- Provide us with sufficient understanding of something: Cung cấp cho chúng ta đủ sự hiểu biết về cái gì đó
- Being in the presence of something: Tận mắt chiêm ngưỡng
- Historical artefacts/artifacts: Hiện vật lịch sử
- Art works / works of art: Tác phẩm nghệ thuật
- In this digital era: Trong thời đại kỹ thuật số hiện nay. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý CỤM CÓ "THIS / THAT / THESE / THOSE" THƯỜNG GẶP
- Negative/adverse/damaging/detrimental/devastating effects: Tác hại (khủng khiếp)
- To see X with one’s own eyes: Nhìn thấy X tận mắt / tận mắt thấy X
- The X at issue: Cái X đang bàn
- Far from reasonable: Nghe không có lý tí nào
- The global trend towards deindustrialization: Xu thế toàn cầu hướng về sự phi công nghiệp hóa + to name but a few: Xin dẫn ra một vài thí dụ tiêu biểu
- To raise children tech-free: Nuôi dạy con cái theo lối sống phi công nghệ
- Culturally and historically important destinations: Những điểm đến/du lịch quan trọng về phương diện văn hoá và lịch sử. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách paraphrase từ "important" (diễn đạt "quan trọng" tiếng anh)
- A country’s architectural style: Phong cách kiến trúc của một quốc gia phản ánh văn hóa và lịch sử quốc gia đó
- Admire the grandeur of these places: Ngắm nhìn sự trang nghiêm oai vệ của những địa điểm này
- Exhibit a huge collection of priceless national masterpieces: Trưng bày một bộ sưu tầm khổng lồ các kiệt tác của quốc gia
- The aesthetic appeal of French architecture: Sức hấp dẫn về mặt thẩm mỹ của kiến trúc nước Pháp
III. Phân tích
IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:
- Nếu theo hướng TOTALLY DISAGREE có thể chia bố cục như sau:
- BODY 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY DISAGREE
- Main idea: The existence of invaluable artifacts and artistic creations is the expression of diversity in human society, enriching the beauty of life (HOẶC: museums and galleries help us develop a sense of respect towards history and art of our own country or other countries in the world). >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Phân biệt "priceless, invaluable, valueless & worthless
- Supporting idea:
- Were there no places to store historical items and art works, with the fact that modern communities are becoming increasingly similar, local inhabitants would get lost in the search of their identity and there would be nothing to break the monotony. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách paraphrase "similar" tiếng anh
- Admiring real historical objects or artworks can help people learn more about their own country’s history and aesthetic field , thus making them cherish part of their national identity.
- Example: Imagine a world where magnificent sculptures like Michelangelo's David or ancient artifacts like Viking ships existed only in textbooks.
- BODY 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao TOTALLY DISAGREE
- Main idea: Memorial houses and art museums offer first-hand experience to visitors so that they can sense the atmosphere of historical events and people as well as contemplate artistic masterpieces with their bare eyes (HOẶC: having real experience of seeing history-related objects or famous artworks will generate inspiration or new sources of ideas for those who are not only in the field of art or history but also for people in other professions). >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng động từ "experience" tiếng anh
- Supporting idea:
- Without museums and associated places, tourists would have no culturally and historically important destinations to visit
- Local children would not have any chance to witness what they have theoretically learnt at school.
- Example: Memorial houses, such as the Gandhi Ashram in Ahmedabad, India, offer a window into the lives of historical figures. These spaces can be particularly valuable for local children, as they provide a tangible connection to their history and heritage that goes beyond classroom learning.
- BODY 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY DISAGREE
- Có thể tham khảo các ý khác:
- The sophistication of art or the intensity of war will be shown, which enable people to experience the authenticity that cannot be seen on the Internet. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng động từ "enable" tiếng anh
- The most conspicuous case-in-point is when one can observe the real “Mona Lisa” at the museum, it may be a valuable cultural experience that hardly anything can compare.
IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:
Essay: The Enduring Importance of Public Museums and Art Galleries
Public museums and art galleries play a pivotal (cực kỳ quan trọng - essential; crucial; fundamental) role in preserving (bảo tồn - safeguarding; maintaining; protecting) and showcasing (trưng bày - exhibiting; displaying; presenting) cultural and historical artifacts that define human civilization. Although some argue that technology provides convenient access to these artifacts, I strongly believe that physical museums and galleries remain indispensable (không thể thiếu - essential; necessary; crucial) for fostering cultural appreciation and offering firsthand (trực tiếp - direct; immediate; real-time) experiences that virtual platforms simply cannot replicate.
Firstly, brick-and-mortar (vật chất - physical; tangible; real) museums and galleries serve as cultural repositories (kho tàng văn hóa - archives; collections; storerooms), safeguarding invaluable (vô giá - priceless; precious; irreplaceable) historical artifacts and artworks. These institutions preserve not only objects but also the collective memory (ký ức tập thể - shared memory; common recollection; public remembrance) of societies, which is crucial for maintaining cultural identity. Virtual tours (tham quan ảo - online exploration; digital visit; simulated experience) may provide convenience, but they lack the aesthetic authenticity (tính chân thực thẩm mỹ - genuine experience; artistic integrity; true representation) and emotional impact of seeing a masterpiece up close. For instance, the majestic (hùng vĩ - grand; magnificent; splendid) presence of the Statue of David (Tượng David - iconic sculpture; historical artwork; cultural masterpiece) in Florence evokes a sense of wonder and national pride that is simply incomparable (không thể so sánh - unmatched; peerless; unique) through a computer screen.>> Form đăng kí giải đề thi thật IELTS 4 kĩ năng kèm bài giải bộ đề 100 đề PART 2 IELTS SPEAKING quý đang thi (update hàng tuần) từ IELTS TUTOR
Secondly, physical museums and art galleries provide immersive experiences (trải nghiệm đắm chìm - engaging experience; full immersion; deep involvement) that enhance learning and appreciation for history and art. Unlike digital platforms, these spaces allow visitors to navigate historical narratives (khám phá những câu chuyện lịch sử - explore history; understand the past; engage with historical contexts) in person, creating lasting memories. For example, the Gandhi Ashram (Khu tưởng niệm Gandhi - memorial site; historical landmark; cultural monument) in Ahmedabad enables visitors to walk through the very grounds where Gandhi orchestrated his revolutionary ideas, instilling a deeper understanding of his legacy. Such tangible interactions (tương tác trực tiếp - physical engagement; real-life connection; hands-on experience) with history are irreplaceable (không thể thay thế - unique; one-of-a-kind; non-substitutable) and promote a stronger emotional connection (kết nối cảm xúc - personal attachment; sentimental bond; emotional tie) to the past.
In conclusion, while technological advances have made historical artifacts more accessible, public museums and art galleries remain cornerstones (nền tảng - foundations; pillars; bedrocks) of cultural preservation and education. Their ability to provide firsthand exposure (tiếp xúc trực tiếp - direct experience; personal observation; real-life engagement) to art and history ensures that our connection to the past remains vivid and unforgettable (không thể quên - memorable; enduring; lasting).
New Vocabulary:
pivotal (cực kỳ quan trọng) - essential; crucial; fundamental
Synonyms: critical, vital, indispensable
Antonyms: insignificant, minor, trivial
preserving (bảo tồn) - safeguarding; maintaining; protecting
Synonyms: conserving, upholding, securing
Antonyms: neglecting, abandoning, disregarding
showcasing (trưng bày) - exhibiting; displaying; presenting
Synonyms: featuring, demonstrating, highlighting
Antonyms: hiding, concealing, withholding
indispensable (không thể thiếu) - essential; necessary; crucial
Synonyms: vital, mandatory, required
Antonyms: optional, unnecessary, superfluous
firsthand (trực tiếp) - direct; immediate; real-time
Synonyms: personal, unmediated, primary
Antonyms: indirect, secondhand, distant
brick-and-mortar (vật chất) - physical; tangible; real
Synonyms: concrete, solid, actual
Antonyms: virtual, digital, online
cultural repositories (kho tàng văn hóa) - archives; collections; storerooms
Synonyms: museums, libraries, vaults
Antonyms: deserts, wastelands, voids
collective memory (ký ức tập thể) - shared memory; common recollection; public remembrance
Synonyms: group consciousness, communal memory, public awareness
Antonyms: individual memory, personal recollection, isolated understanding
aesthetic authenticity (tính chân thực thẩm mỹ) - genuine experience; artistic integrity; true representation
Synonyms: visual purity, artistic truth, cultural accuracy
Antonyms: artificiality, imitation, falseness
immersive experiences (trải nghiệm đắm chìm) - engaging experience; full immersion; deep involvement
Synonyms: absorbing, captivating, enveloping
Antonyms: detached, uninvolved, superficial

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