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I. Đề bài
The table provides a comparison of the expenditure rate of the government on education and training and participation rate of 18-24 year olds in the same in five nations in the year 2002.
II. Kiến thức liên quan
IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn:
III. Phân tích
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- Body 1: Viết về Poland + slovenia
- Poland and Slovenia exhibited the highest rates of involvement, with Poland at 44% and Slovenia at 40%
- Slovenia's spending rate was notably higher at 25% compared to Poland's 5%, representing a difference of 20%.
- Body 2: Viết về 3 nước còn lại
- In 2002, an analysis of expenditure and participation in the Czech Republic, Romania, and Hungary revealed similar government spending percentages on education and training, ranging from 9% to 13%.>> IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫn kĩ SỬA BÀI IELTS WRITING TASK 2 ĐỀ THI THẬT NGÀY 22/8/2020 của HS IELTS TUTOR đạt 6.5 Writing
- Romania and Hungary showed comparable rates of teenage participation, at around 30%
- Body 1: Viết về Poland + slovenia
IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:
The table illustrates (depicts, displays, demonstrates) the allocation (distribution, apportionment, assignment) of government expenditure (spending, disbursement, outlay) on education and training and the engagement (participation, involvement, attendance) rate of 18–24-year-olds across five European nations in 2002.
Overall, while some countries prioritized government expenditure on education, others demonstrated high youth participation irrespective of financial commitment.
In terms of youth participation, Poland and Slovenia stood out (excelled, dominated, led) with the highest rates, at 44% and 40% respectively. However, Slovenia's budget allocation (funding distribution, financial provision, monetary allotment) for education and training was substantially higher (considerably greater, markedly elevated, significantly larger), standing at 25%, while Poland's spending was a mere 5%, indicating a significant disparity (notable difference, clear gap, evident divergence) of 20%. This contrast (difference, variation, distinction) highlights Slovenia's emphasis (focus, priority, attention) on educational investment compared to Poland's modest contribution (minimal support, limited investment, minor funding).
An evaluation (assessment, analysis, examination) of the remaining three countries—Czech Republic, Romania, and Hungary—revealed comparable spending rates (similar expenditure levels, equivalent funding proportions, parallel budget allocations), fluctuating between 9% and 13%. Despite these moderate investments (reasonable funding, average expenditure, standard spending), Romania and Hungary had analogous participation rates (comparable involvement, equivalent engagement, similar turnout) among the youth, both around 30%. This suggests that financial input (budget provision, economic allocation, fiscal support) did not directly correlate (match, align, correspond) with youth involvement in these two nations.
📌 New Vocabulary with Definitions
illustrates (minh họa) — to show or explain something clearly.
allocation (sự phân bổ) — the distribution of resources or duties for a particular purpose.
expenditure (chi tiêu) — the act of spending funds.
engagement (sự tham gia) — involvement or participation in an activity.
stood out (nổi bật) — to be noticeably different or superior.
budget allocation (phân bổ ngân sách) — the amount of financial resources dedicated to a particular purpose.
substantially higher (cao hơn đáng kể) — significantly greater in amount or degree.
significant disparity (sự khác biệt lớn) — a noticeable difference between two amounts or levels.
contrast (sự tương phản) — a difference that is clearly noticeable.
emphasis (sự nhấn mạnh) — special importance given to something.
modest contribution (đóng góp khiêm tốn) — a small or limited amount of support or investment.
evaluation (sự đánh giá) — the process of assessing or analyzing something.
comparable spending rates (tỷ lệ chi tiêu tương đương) — similar levels of financial expenditure.
moderate investments (đầu tư vừa phải) — reasonable or average financial input.
analogous participation rates (tỷ lệ tham gia tương tự) — involvement levels that are similar or alike.
financial input (đầu vào tài chính) — the money invested in a particular area.
correlate (tương quan) — to have a mutual relationship or connection.
📌 Grammar Structures & Explanation
Compound Adjectives
substantially higher, modest contribution, moderate investments, analogous participation rates
→ "substantially higher" (cao hơn đáng kể), "modest contribution" (đóng góp khiêm tốn)
Complex Sentences
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: An evaluation of the remaining three countries—Czech Republic, Romania, and Hungary—revealed comparable spending rates, fluctuating between 9% and 13%.
→ Một đánh giá về ba quốc gia còn lại — Cộng hòa Séc, Romania và Hungary — cho thấy tỷ lệ chi tiêu tương đương, dao động từ 9% đến 13%.
Inversion for Emphasis
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: Not only did Slovenia spend substantially more, but it also led in youth participation.
→ Không chỉ Slovenia chi tiêu nhiều hơn đáng kể mà còn dẫn đầu về sự tham gia của thanh niên.
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