🔥Giải đề"Many people decide on a career path early in their lives and keep to it. This, they argue, leads to a more satisfying working life. To what extent do you agree with this view? What other things can people do in order to have a satisfying working life?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Đề thi 16/3/2024)- Bài mẫu, kèm dịch & giải thích từ vựng & cấu trúc grammar khó

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích đề"Many people decide on a career path early in their lives and keep to it. This, they argue, leads to a more satisfying working life. To what extent do you agree with this view? What other things can people do in order to have a satisfying working life?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Many people decide on a career path early in their lives and keep to it. This, they argue, leads to a more satisfying working life. To what extent do you agree with this view? What other things can people do in order to have a satisfying working life?

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• an early age: giai đoạn đầu
• want to pursue: muốn theo đuổi
• the rest of their lives: phần đời còn lại
• the same profession: cùng một công việc
• suit many people: phù hợp nhiều người. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng  dẫn PHÂN BIỆT "FIT", "SUIT" & "SUITABLE" TIẾNG ANH
• seeking job satisfaction: tìm kiếm việc mong ước
• a defined career path: đường sự nghiệp đã xác định
• a satisfying working life: đời sống công việc hài lòng
• sense of satisfaction: cảm giác hài lòng
• the relevant qualifications: bằng cấp liên quan
• undertake years of training: dành nhiều năm theo học
• find their work so rewarding: thấy công việc xứng đáng
• a reinvigorating experience: kinh nghiệm sống lại
• a means of earning money: phương tiện kiếm tiền
• a positive working atmosphere: môi trường công việc tích cực. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng  dẫn Cách dùng danh từ "atmosphere"
• enthusiastic colleagues: đồng nghiệp nhiệt huyết
• inspirational boss: sếp có khả năng truyền cảm hứng
• more satisfying: thỏa mãn hơn
• this is by no means: điều này không có nghĩa

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Dạng 2 question có thể bố cục bài như sau:
• Body 1: Trả lời câu hỏi 1 To what extent do you agree with this view?  - TOTALLY DISAGREE 
  • Main idea 1: It gives employees financial stability
    • Supporting idea: Long term employees normally accrue financial rewards such as a higher salary and a decent pension plan. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng  dẫn Cách dùng từ "instill" tiếng anh
    • Example: Toyota, the renowned Japanese car manufacturer, is known for fostering a culture of loyalty and growth within its workforce through its commitment to long-term employment practices, which frequently results in financial security for employees. 
  • Main idea 2: Employers often hold a prejudice against those who frequently alternate between occupations (HOẶC: companies are reluctant to hire for uncertainty) 
    • Supporting idea: They think a person who does so will not be able to contribute to their company long-term (HOẶC: Employers would reject hiring so-called “job hoppers” on the basis that they want prospective employees to devote themselves to a company in the long run). >> IELTS TUTOR hướng  dẫn Cách dùng danh từ "perspective" tiếng anh
• Body 2: Trả lời câu hỏi 2 What other things can people do in order to have a satisfying working life?"
  • Main idea 1: a positive working atmosphere, enthusiastic colleagues, and an inspirational boss can make working life much more satisfying, regardless of the profession.
    • Supporting idea: When coworkers are passionate about their tasks and collaborate effectively, it fosters a sense of camaraderie and collective purpose, leading to increased productivity and job satisfaction. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng  dẫn Cách dùng "regardless / regardless of" tiếng anh
  • Main idea 2: high salary 
    • Supporting idea: Some people see their jobs as simply a means of earning money, and they are happy if their salary is high enough to allow them to enjoy life outside work. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng  dẫn Paraphrase "salary" tiếng anh
    • Example: Research conducted by Kahneman and Deaton (2010) suggests that while there is a correlation between income and overall life satisfaction, this relationship plateaus beyond an annual income of approximately $75,000 in the United States, indicating that additional income beyond this threshold has little to no impact on overall happiness or well-being.

IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:

Many individuals choose a career early in life and remain committed to it, believing that this approach brings long-term satisfaction. I totally disagree with this view, as sticking to a single job does not always guarantee fulfillment or success in today's dynamic job market.

While remaining in one profession may offer financial stability (financial stability – sự ổn định tài chính – the condition of having consistent and secure income), it is not the sole factor contributing to job satisfaction. Long-standing employees (long-standing – lâu năm – having existed or continued for a long time) may receive benefits like higher salaries and attractive pension schemes (pension scheme – chế độ lương hưu – a plan that provides retirement income). For instance, Toyota, the renowned Japanese automaker, nurtures a loyal workforce through long-term employment strategies, which often results in economic security (economic security – an toàn kinh tế – a state of having reliable financial resources). Moreover, employers tend to harbor prejudice against (harbor prejudice against – có định kiến với – to hold a negative bias or opinion toward someone) those who frequently switch jobs, fearing such individuals lack commitment. Many companies avoid hiring “job hoppers” (job hopper – người thường xuyên thay đổi việc – someone who changes jobs frequently) due to concerns about retention and loyalty.>> tham khảo CẦN VIẾT & THU ÂM BAO NHIÊU BÀI ĐỂ ĐẠT 8.0 SPEAKING & 7.0 WRITING?

To achieve a satisfying career, individuals can focus on elements beyond job permanence. A collaborative work environment (collaborative work environment – môi trường làm việc hợp tác – a workplace where people work well together) filled with motivated colleagues and inspirational leadership greatly enhances workplace contentment. When employees share a common mission and work harmoniously, it creates a strong sense of camaraderie (camaraderie – tình đồng nghiệp – mutual trust and friendship among people who spend a lot of time together), making even demanding roles enjoyable. Additionally, for some people, a lucrative income (lucrative income – thu nhập cao – money earned from a job that is very profitable) is the main source of satisfaction. As demonstrated in research by Kahneman and Deaton (2010), income significantly affects life satisfaction up to a certain threshold, beyond which happiness no longer increases. This indicates that while money is not everything, it plays a critical role in work-life satisfaction.

In conclusion, instead of sticking to one career path, individuals should consider other crucial aspects such as workplace culture and income to find genuine fulfillment.

🔍 New Vocabulary with Definitions (English & Vietnamese):

1. Financial stability – sự ổn định tài chính – consistent and reliable income

2. Long-standing – lâu năm – having existed or continued for a long time

3. Pension scheme – chế độ lương hưu – retirement income plan

4. Economic security – an toàn kinh tế – reliable financial situation

5. Harbor prejudice against – có định kiến với – hold a negative bias

6. Job hopper – người thường xuyên thay đổi việc – someone who switches jobs often

7. Collaborative work environment – môi trường làm việc hợp tác – workplace where cooperation is common

8. Motivated colleagues – đồng nghiệp nhiệt huyết – enthusiastic team members

9. Inspirational leadership – lãnh đạo truyền cảm hứng – leaders who motivate and guide

10. Camaraderie – tình đồng nghiệp – friendship and trust among colleagues

11. Lucrative income – thu nhập cao – well-paying salary

🔁 Synonyms & Antonyms of “financial stability” (Example from essay: “While remaining in one profession may offer financial stability, it is not the sole factor…”)

• Synonyms:
  economic security, steady income, financial security

• Antonyms:
  financial instability, economic uncertainty, unreliable earnings

✍️ Difficult Grammar Structures Used + Vietnamese Translation:

1. While remaining in one profession may offer financial stability, it is not the sole factor contributing to job satisfaction.
   → ELTS TUTOR giải thích: Mặc dù làm một nghề có thể mang lại sự ổn định tài chính, nhưng đó không phải là yếu tố duy nhất góp phần tạo nên sự hài lòng trong công việc.
   (Complex sentence with subordinating conjunction “while”)

2. Employers tend to harbor prejudice against those who frequently switch jobs, fearing such individuals lack commitment.
   → ELTS TUTOR giải thích: Các nhà tuyển dụng có xu hướng có định kiến với những người thường xuyên thay đổi công việc, lo sợ rằng họ thiếu sự cam kết.
   (Complex sentence with present participle clause: fearing such individuals...)

3. As demonstrated in research by Kahneman and Deaton (2010), income significantly affects life satisfaction up to a certain threshold.
   → ELTS TUTOR giải thích: Như được chứng minh trong nghiên cứu của Kahneman và Deaton (2010), thu nhập ảnh hưởng đáng kể đến sự hài lòng trong cuộc sống cho đến một ngưỡng nhất định.
   (Complex sentence with passive voice and prepositional phrase)

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