Bên cạnh Phân tích +kèm sửa bài"The table below shows the number of visitors in the UK and their average spending from 2003 to 2008" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Some people think most crimes are the result of circumstances like poverty and other social problems. Others believe that they are caused by people who are bad in nature. Discuss both views and give your opinion." IELTS WRITING TASK 2.
I. Đề bài
Some people think most crimes are the result of circumstances like poverty and other social problems. Others believe that they are caused by people who are bad in nature. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
II. Kiến thức liên quan
IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn:
III. Phân tích
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- Dạng discuss both views có thể bố cục bài như sau:
- Body 1: Viết về quan điểm Some people think most crimes are the result of circumstances like poverty and other social problems >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng danh từ"circumstance"tiếng anh
- Main idea 1: Individuals who grow up in deprived and disadvantaged environments often lack access to basic needs such as education, healthcare, and stable employment.
- Supporting idea: Without these opportunities, they may turn to crime as a means of survival or to escape their circumstances.
- Example: An example of this could be seen in the high crime rates in low-income neighborhoods. People living in poverty may struggle to meet their basic needs such as food, housing, and healthcare, and may not have access to education and job opportunities. As a result, they may resort to criminal activities such as theft or drug dealing to make ends meet.
- Main idea 2: These individuals may be exposed to violence and crime from a young age, leading to a normalization of these behaviors.>> Form đăng kí giải đề thi thật IELTS 4 kĩ năng kèm bài giải bộ đề 100 đề PART 2 IELTS SPEAKING quý đang thi (update hàng tuần) từ IELTS TUTOR
- Supporting idea: Children who witness criminal behavior in their communities may come to view it as a normal part of everyday life and may be more likely to engage in criminal activities themselves as they get older.
- Example: For example, children who grow up in households with domestic violence may become desensitized to violent behavior and may even replicate it in their own relationships.
- Main idea 1: Individuals who grow up in deprived and disadvantaged environments often lack access to basic needs such as education, healthcare, and stable employment.
- Body 2: Viết về quan điểm Others believe that they are caused by people who are bad in nature & nêu rõ mình ủng hộ quan điểm này
- Main idea 1: Individuals have a choice in their actions, and criminal behavior is a result of personal moral character >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng danh từ "individual" tiếng anh
- Supporting idea: Individuals who commit crimes do so because they have a predisposition to violence and deviant behavior, regardless of their upbringing or environment.
- Example: Ted Bundy, despite his stable upbringing and education, committed numerous murders, suggesting that his criminal behavior stemmed from an inherent predisposition to violence and deviance, thus supporting the idea that personal moral character plays a crucial role in criminal actions.
- Main idea 2: Some individuals may have a predisposition towards criminal behavior due to factors such as genetics or childhood experiences.
- Supporting idea: Some research suggests that certain genetic and environmental factors may increase the likelihood of engaging in criminal behavior.
- Main idea 1: Individuals have a choice in their actions, and criminal behavior is a result of personal moral character >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng danh từ "individual" tiếng anh
- Body 1: Viết về quan điểm Some people think most crimes are the result of circumstances like poverty and other social problems >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng danh từ"circumstance"tiếng anh
IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:
Crime is an intractable (difficult to manage or resolve - khó giải quyết) social issue with diverse contributing factors. While some contend that crimes are primarily driven by social issues like socioeconomic disparities (unequal distribution of wealth and resources - chênh lệch kinh tế xã hội) and poverty, I firmly believe that they are largely the result of individuals who are inherently malevolent (having or showing a wish to do evil to others - độc ác) by nature.
On one hand, many argue that social deprivation (lack of basic necessities and opportunities - thiếu thốn xã hội) is the root cause of criminal behavior. People living in impoverished communities (extremely poor areas - cộng đồng nghèo khó) often face limited access to education, stable employment, and healthcare, which can push them toward illegal activities as a means of survival. For instance, in many underprivileged neighborhoods (areas lacking financial stability and opportunities - khu dân cư khó khăn), individuals may resort to theft or drug dealing simply to secure basic needs like food and shelter. Furthermore, growing up in environments plagued by domestic violence (violent or aggressive behavior within the home - bạo lực gia đình) or gang culture can normalize (to make something seem normal or acceptable - bình thường hóa) violent behavior. For example, children who witness regular conflicts are more likely to perceive aggression as an acceptable means of conflict resolution, potentially leading to criminal behavior in adulthood.>> Form đăng kí giải đề thi thật IELTS 4 kĩ năng kèm bài giải bộ đề 100 đề PART 2 IELTS SPEAKING quý đang thi (update hàng tuần) từ IELTS TUTOR
On the other hand, I strongly believe that criminal behavior often stems from an individual's innate malevolence (natural tendency towards evil - ác tâm bẩm sinh) rather than just social circumstances. Certain people possess antisocial tendencies (behavior that is harmful or lacks consideration for others - xu hướng chống đối xã hội) that drive them to commit crimes, irrespective of their upbringing. A notable example is Ted Bundy, whose heinous acts (wicked or atrocious crimes - hành động tàn ác) were not a product of poverty or social exclusion, but rather a reflection of his inherently malicious disposition (natural inclination towards harmful behavior - bản chất độc ác). Furthermore, scientific studies have identified genetic predispositions (inherited tendencies towards certain behaviors - khuynh hướng di truyền) that increase the likelihood of criminal activity. According to research by the National Institute of Justice, individuals with a family history of crime are significantly more likely to engage in unlawful activities, highlighting that personal traits often outweigh social influences.
In conclusion, although poverty and adverse environments (harmful or unfavorable conditions - môi trường bất lợi) contribute to criminal behavior, I believe that inherent malevolence and genetic influences play a more decisive role in propelling individuals toward crime.
New Vocabulary
intractable (difficult to manage or resolve - khó giải quyết)
Synonyms: unmanageable, stubborn, unyielding
Antonyms: manageable, controllable, flexible
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: Crime is an intractable social issue with diverse contributing factors.
socioeconomic disparities (unequal distribution of wealth and resources - chênh lệch kinh tế xã hội)
Synonyms: economic inequality, financial gap, social imbalance
Antonyms: equality, equity, parity
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: While some contend that crimes are primarily driven by social issues like socioeconomic disparities and poverty...
malevolent (having or showing a wish to do evil to others - độc ác)
Synonyms: malicious, wicked, vindictive
Antonyms: benevolent, kind-hearted, compassionate
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: I firmly believe that they are largely the result of individuals who are inherently malevolent by nature.
social deprivation (lack of basic necessities and opportunities - thiếu thốn xã hội)
Synonyms: poverty, destitution, scarcity
Antonyms: affluence, abundance, wealth
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: Many argue that social deprivation is the root cause of criminal behavior.
impoverished communities (extremely poor areas - cộng đồng nghèo khó)
Synonyms: destitute areas, poverty-stricken neighborhoods, low-income regions
Antonyms: affluent communities, wealthy neighborhoods, prosperous areas
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: People living in impoverished communities often face limited access to education, stable employment, and healthcare.
underprivileged neighborhoods (areas lacking financial stability and opportunities - khu dân cư khó khăn)
Synonyms: disadvantaged areas, marginalized communities, deprived zones
Antonyms: privileged areas, affluent zones, prosperous communities
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: In many underprivileged neighborhoods, individuals may resort to theft or drug dealing...
domestic violence (violent or aggressive behavior within the home - bạo lực gia đình)
Synonyms: household abuse, family violence, intimate partner violence
Antonyms: family harmony, peaceful household, safe environment
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: Growing up in environments plagued by domestic violence...
innate malevolence (natural tendency towards evil - ác tâm bẩm sinh)
Synonyms: inborn wickedness, inherent evil, intrinsic cruelty
Antonyms: inborn goodness, inherent kindness, intrinsic compassion
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: I strongly believe that criminal behavior often stems from an individual's innate malevolence.
antisocial tendencies (behavior that is harmful or lacks consideration for others - xu hướng chống đối xã hội)
Synonyms: deviant behavior, misanthropic attitudes, sociopathic traits
Antonyms: prosocial behavior, community-oriented actions, cooperative tendencies
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: Certain people possess antisocial tendencies that drive them to commit crimes...
heinous acts (wicked or atrocious crimes - hành động tàn ác)
Synonyms: atrocious deeds, vile crimes, monstrous actions
Antonyms: virtuous deeds, honorable actions, noble acts
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: A notable example is Ted Bundy, whose heinous acts were not a product of poverty...
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