Phân tích"The charts below show the number of working hours per week, in industrial sector, in four European countries in 2002." IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (Đề thi IELTS 18/5/2023) - Bài mẫu, kèm dịch & giải thích từ vựng & cấu trúc grammar khó​

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "The charts below show the number of working hours per week, in industrial sector, in four European countries in 2002." IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (Đề thi IELTS 18/5/2023)

The charts below show the number of working hours per week, in industrial sector, in four European countries in 2002. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons with relevant.

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  • Overall:
    • In France, the highest proportion of employees worked for 31-35 hours, whereas the majority of workers in the other three countries spent 36-40 hours per week
  • Body 1: Mô tả France + The UK  
    • France: 
      • In France, approximately half of the workers had a working week of 31-35 hours, with 35% working 36-40 hours and 20% working 46-50 hours. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách paraphrase từ "approximately" trong IELTS
      • Around 10% of workers fell into each of the remaining hour categories. 
    • UK:
      • The UK exhibited the highest percentage of workers who clocked 50+ hours per week among all countries surveyed while almost 50% worked for 36-40 hours.
  • Body 2: Mô tả Denmark + Sweden
    • In Denmark and Sweden, the highest percentage of workers fell into the 36-40 hour range (nêu số liệu)
    • The second and third highest proportions in Denmark were for 31-35 hours (25%) and 41-45 hours (10%) while in Sweden, it was 31-35 hours (35%) and 41-45 hours (30%). >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng danh từ "proportion" tiếng anh

IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo

The bar charts illustrate the number of working hours per week in the industrial sector across four European nations in 2002.

Overall, France had the highest percentage of employees working 31–35 hours weekly, while the majority of the workforce in the UK, Denmark, and Sweden worked 36–40 hours.

In France, roughly half of industrial employees had a part-time schedule (part-time schedule – lịch làm việc bán thời gian – a work pattern involving fewer hours than full-time), whereas around 35% worked standard full-time hours (36–40 hours). Notably, a significant minority (20%) were engaged in long-hour shifts (long-hour shifts – ca làm kéo dài – working hours extending beyond the standard). In the UK, nearly half of the workers were in the 36–40 hour group, and it recorded the highest proportion of employees working in excess of 50 hours (in excess of – nhiều hơn – more than; beyond a certain limit).>> Form đăng kí giải đề thi thật IELTS 4 kĩ năng kèm bài giải bộ đề 100 đề PART 2 IELTS SPEAKING quý đang thi (update hàng tuần) từ IELTS TUTOR

Denmark and Sweden followed similar trends, with the dominant category (the dominant category – nhóm chiếm ưu thế – the group with the highest proportion) being 36–40 hours. In Denmark, about 25% worked 31–35 hours and 10% worked 41–45. In contrast, Sweden had a more even distribution, with 35% and 30% working 31–35 and 41–45 hours respectively.

🔹 New Vocabulary (with Vietnamese + English meaning)

1. part-time schedule – lịch làm việc bán thời gian – a work pattern involving fewer hours than full-time

2. long-hour shifts – ca làm kéo dài – working hours extending beyond the standard

3. in excess of – nhiều hơn – more than; beyond a certain limit

4. the dominant category – nhóm chiếm ưu thế – the group with the highest proportion

5. even distribution – phân bố đồng đều – a fairly equal allocation across groups

6. standard full-time hours – giờ làm việc toàn thời gian tiêu chuẩn – the common 36–40 hour work week

7. majority of the workforce – phần lớn lực lượng lao động – most employees in the working population

🔹 Vocabulary List: Synonyms & Antonyms (with examples from essay)

🔹 Advanced Grammar Structures

1. Whereas-clause (contrast)

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ "France had the highest percentage... whereas the majority... in the UK, Denmark, and Sweden..."

   • → France có tỷ lệ cao nhất... trong khi phần lớn... ở Anh, Đan Mạch và Thụy Điển...

2. Reduced relative clause

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ "workers working in excess of 50 hours" (instead of "who were working")

   • → người lao động làm việc nhiều hơn 50 giờ

3. Noun phrase as subject

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ "The dominant category being 36–40 hours"

   • → Nhóm chiếm ưu thế là 36–40 giờ

4. Compound adjectives

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ long-hour shifts, part-time schedule, standard full-time hours

   • → các cụm tính từ ghép giúp tăng độ học thuật và mô tả chính xác

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