Bên cạnh cung cấp thêm PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5), Hãy đọc kĩ Giải đề"In the past, important knowledge of culture and history was stored in museum. Nowadays information is freely available on internet, therefore is no longer need for museum. To what extent do you agree or disagree"IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Đề thi 17/4/2024)
I. Đề bài
In the past, important knowledge of culture and history was stored in museum. Nowadays information is freely available on internet, therefore is no longer need for museum. To what extent do you agree or disagree
II. Từ vựng
IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:
- Obtain information about art, history or culture: Lấy thông tin về nghệ thuật, lịch sử và văn hóa
- Provide us with sufficient understanding of something: Cung cấp cho chúng ta đủ sự hiểu biết về cái gì đó
- Being in the presence of something: Tận mắt chiêm ngưỡng
- Historical artefacts/artifacts: Hiện vật lịch sử
- Art works / works of art: Tác phẩm nghệ thuật
- In this digital era: Trong thời đại kỹ thuật số hiện nay. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý CỤM CÓ "THIS / THAT / THESE / THOSE" THƯỜNG GẶP
- Negative/adverse/damaging/detrimental/devastating effects: Tác hại (khủng khiếp)
- To see X with one’s own eyes: Nhìn thấy X tận mắt / tận mắt thấy X
- The X at issue: Cái X đang bàn
- Far from reasonable: Nghe không có lý tí nào
- The global trend towards deindustrialization: Xu thế toàn cầu hướng về sự phi công nghiệp hóa + to name but a few: Xin dẫn ra một vài thí dụ tiêu biểu
- To raise children tech-free: Nuôi dạy con cái theo lối sống phi công nghệ
- Culturally and historically important destinations: Những điểm đến/du lịch quan trọng về phương diện văn hoá và lịch sử. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách paraphrase từ "important" (diễn đạt "quan trọng" tiếng anh)
- A country’s architectural style: Phong cách kiến trúc của một quốc gia phản ánh văn hóa và lịch sử quốc gia đó
- Admire the grandeur of these places: Ngắm nhìn sự trang nghiêm oai vệ của những địa điểm này
- Exhibit a huge collection of priceless national masterpieces: Trưng bày một bộ sưu tầm khổng lồ các kiệt tác của quốc gia
- The aesthetic appeal of French architecture: Sức hấp dẫn về mặt thẩm mỹ của kiến trúc nước Pháp
III. Phân tích
IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:
- Nếu theo hướng TOTALLY DISAGREE có thể chia bố cục như sau:
- BODY 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY DISAGREE
- Main idea: The existence of invaluable artifacts and artistic creations is the expression of diversity in human society, enriching the beauty of life (HOẶC: museums and galleries help us develop a sense of respect towards history and art of our own country or other countries in the world). >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Phân biệt "priceless, invaluable, valueless & worthless
- Supporting idea:
- Were there no places to store historical items and art works, with the fact that modern communities are becoming increasingly similar, local inhabitants would get lost in the search of their identity and there would be nothing to break the monotony. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách paraphrase "similar" tiếng anh
- Admiring real historical objects or artworks can help people learn more about their own country’s history and aesthetic field , thus making them cherish part of their national identity.
- Example: The British Museum in London, with its extensive exhibits spanning ancient Egypt, Mesopotamia, and Greece, offers a profound glimpse into the diverse civilizations' artistic achievements and values, nurturing a deeper respect for human history. Similarly, museums devoted to national heritage safeguard traditions, crafts, and artistic expressions, preserving our identity and celebrating the distinctive legacies of our cultures on a global scale.
- BODY 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao TOTALLY DISAGREE
- Main idea: Memorial houses and art museums offer first-hand experience to visitors so that they can sense the atmosphere of historical events and people as well as contemplate artistic masterpieces with their bare eyes (HOẶC: having real experience of seeing history-related objects or famous artworks will generate inspiration or new sources of ideas for those who are not only in the field of art or history but also for people in other professions). >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng động từ "experience" tiếng anh
- Supporting idea:
- Without museums and associated places, tourists would have no culturally and historically important destinations to visit
- Local children would not have any chance to witness what they have theoretically learnt at school.
- Example: Visiting the Anne Frank House in Amsterdam immerses visitors in the harrowing conditions endured by Anne Frank and her family during the Holocaust, forging a poignant connection to the realities of wartime suffering. Likewise, encountering the Mona Lisa at the Louvre Museum in Paris offers more than a glimpse of a famous artwork; it invites observers to witness the subtle details and mysteries of the painting firsthand, igniting fresh interpretations and artistic imagination.
- BODY 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY DISAGREE
- Có thể tham khảo các ý khác:
- The sophistication of art or the intensity of war will be shown, which enable people to experience the authenticity that cannot be seen on the Internet. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng động từ "enable" tiếng anh
- The most conspicuous case-in-point is when one can observe the real “Mona Lisa” at the museum, it may be a valuable cultural experience that hardly anything can compare.
IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:
In recent years, the proliferation (sự phát triển nhanh chóng - English: rapid increase) of digital platforms has made information about history and culture widely accessible. Despite this, I totally disagree with the notion that museums are no longer necessary for many reasons.
To begin with, museums are repositories (kho lưu trữ - English: storage places for valuable items) of invaluable artifacts (hiện vật vô giá - English: objects of great historical or artistic value) and artistic creations that reflect the diversity and richness of human society. They not only preserve historical items but also act as cultural beacons (ngọn hải đăng văn hóa - English: symbols of cultural significance) that allow visitors to understand and appreciate different civilizations. Were there no physical spaces to store and display these treasures, the monotony (sự đơn điệu - English: lack of variety and interest) of modern communities, increasingly influenced by globalization, would strip local inhabitants of their unique identities. For instance, the British Museum in London, with its extensive exhibits (bộ sưu tập phong phú - English: large collections) spanning ancient Egypt, Mesopotamia, and Greece, offers a profound glimpse (cái nhìn sâu sắc - English: deep insight) into the artistic achievements of diverse civilizations. This not only enriches visitors' understanding of history but also nurtures a deeper respect (sự tôn trọng sâu sắc - English: stronger appreciation) for human creativity and cultural legacies.>> Form đăng kí giải đề thi thật IELTS 4 kĩ năng kèm bài giải bộ đề 100 đề PART 2 IELTS SPEAKING quý đang thi (update hàng tuần) từ IELTS TUTOR
Moreover, museums and memorial houses provide first-hand encounters (trải nghiệm trực tiếp - English: direct experiences) with historical artifacts and artworks that are impossible to replicate online. These real-life experiences allow individuals to sense the atmosphere of historical events and contemplate artistic masterpieces with their bare eyes (mắt trần - English: without any technological mediation), creating emotional and intellectual connections that virtual reality cannot achieve. For example, visiting the Anne Frank House in Amsterdam immerses tourists in the harrowing conditions (điều kiện khắc nghiệt - English: extremely distressing conditions) endured by Anne Frank during the Holocaust, evoking a poignant connection (sự kết nối đầy cảm xúc - English: deeply emotional connection) to wartime suffering. Likewise, witnessing the Mona Lisa at the Louvre Museum in Paris allows observers to appreciate the subtle details (chi tiết tinh tế - English: delicate or fine details) and mysteries of the painting firsthand, inspiring new artistic interpretations. Without museums, such immersive experiences (trải nghiệm đắm chìm - English: deeply engaging experiences) would be reduced to mere pixels on a screen, stripping away their emotional and cultural significance.
In conclusion, while the internet provides vast amounts of information, it cannot replace the tangible experiences (trải nghiệm hữu hình - English: physical and real-life experiences) and cultural significance that museums offer.
New Vocabulary & Explanations
Proliferation (sự phát triển nhanh chóng - English: rapid increase)
Synonyms: expansion, growth, escalation
Antonyms: reduction, decline, diminishment
Custodians (người bảo quản - English: keepers or guardians)
Synonyms: guardians, protectors, caretakers
Antonyms: neglecters, abandoners, destroyers
First-hand experiences (trải nghiệm thực tế - English: direct, real-life experience)
Synonyms: direct experience, personal encounter, hands-on experience
Antonyms: second-hand account, indirect experience, hearsay
Repositories (kho lưu trữ - English: storage places for valuable items)
Synonyms: storage, archive, depository
Antonyms: emptiness, vacuum, desolation
Invaluable artifacts (hiện vật vô giá - English: objects of great historical or artistic value)
Synonyms: priceless treasures, irreplaceable objects, precious relics
Antonyms: worthless items, valueless objects, commonplace items
Cultural beacons (ngọn hải đăng văn hóa - English: symbols of cultural significance)
Synonyms: cultural landmarks, heritage sites, monuments
Antonyms: cultural voids, unremarkable places, neglected sites
Monotony (sự đơn điệu - English: lack of variety and interest)
Synonyms: dullness, sameness, repetition
Antonyms: variety, diversity, vibrancy
Profound glimpse (cái nhìn sâu sắc - English: deep insight)
Synonyms: deep understanding, insightful look, meaningful perspective
Antonyms: shallow view, superficial glance, fleeting look
First-hand encounters (trải nghiệm trực tiếp - English: direct experiences)
Synonyms: direct experiences, personal contact, hands-on encounters
Antonyms: indirect encounters, second-hand experience, virtual engagement
Bare eyes (mắt trần - English: without any technological mediation)
Synonyms: unaided eyes, naked eyes, direct vision
Antonyms: assisted view, mediated perception, filtered view
1️⃣ Were there no... (Inversion for Conditional Type 2)
Structure: Were there no + noun, Subject + would + V (bare-infinitive)
Meaning: This is an inversion used for Second Conditional to express unreal situations in the present or future.
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: Were there no physical spaces to store and display these treasures, the monotony of modern communities would strip local inhabitants of their unique identities.
Vietnamese Translation: Nếu không có không gian vật lý để lưu trữ và trưng bày những báu vật này, sự đơn điệu của các cộng đồng hiện đại sẽ tước đi bản sắc độc đáo của cư dân địa phương.
2️⃣ Not only... but also... (Correlative Conjunctions)
Structure: Not only + Auxiliary + Subject + Verb, but also + Subject + Verb
Meaning: Used to emphasize that two things are true; the second part is often more surprising or important.
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: Museums not only preserve historical items but also act as cultural beacons that allow visitors to understand and appreciate different civilizations.
Vietnamese Translation: Bảo tàng không chỉ lưu giữ những hiện vật lịch sử mà còn là ngọn hải đăng văn hóa giúp du khách hiểu và trân trọng các nền văn minh khác nhau.
3️⃣ Without... (Conditional-like structure)
Structure: Without + noun/gerund, Subject + would + V (bare-infinitive)
Meaning: This structure is used to imply a conditional idea, similar to "If... not".
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: Without museums, such immersive experiences would be reduced to mere pixels on a screen.
Vietnamese Translation: Nếu không có bảo tàng, những trải nghiệm đắm chìm như vậy sẽ chỉ còn là những điểm ảnh trên màn hình.
4️⃣ Allow/Enable + Object + to V (Causative Structure)
Structure: Allow/Enable + someone/something + to + V
Meaning: Used to show that one thing gives permission or capability for another thing to happen.
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: These real-life experiences allow individuals to sense the atmosphere of historical events and contemplate artistic masterpieces with their bare eyes.
Vietnamese Translation: Những trải nghiệm thực tế này cho phép mọi người cảm nhận không khí của các sự kiện lịch sử và chiêm ngưỡng những kiệt tác nghệ thuật bằng mắt thường.
5️⃣ Reduced Relative Clauses (V-ing or V-ed)
Structure:
Active: Noun + V-ing (for active meaning)
Passive: Noun + V-ed (for passive meaning)
Meaning: To shorten relative clauses by removing the relative pronoun and verb.
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: Visitors witnessing the Mona Lisa at the Louvre Museum in Paris can appreciate the subtle details and mysteries of the painting firsthand.
(Visitors who witness the Mona Lisa at the Louvre Museum... → Visitors witnessing the Mona Lisa...)Vietnamese Translation: Khách tham quan khi chiêm ngưỡng bức tranh Mona Lisa tại Bảo tàng Louvre ở Paris có thể đánh giá cao những chi tiết tinh tế và bí ẩn của bức tranh tận mắt.
6️⃣ The fact that... (Noun Clause as a Subject or Object)
Structure: The fact that + clause
Meaning: Used to emphasize a situation or statement.
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: The fact that modern communities are becoming increasingly similar would strip local inhabitants of their unique identities.
Vietnamese Translation: Thực tế là các cộng đồng hiện đại ngày càng trở nên giống nhau sẽ tước đi bản sắc độc đáo của cư dân địa phương.
7️⃣ Such... that... (Cause and Effect Structure)
Structure: Such + adjective + noun + that + clause
Meaning: Emphasizes the degree of something that it causes a specific result.
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: Without museums, such immersive experiences would be reduced to mere pixels on a screen.
Vietnamese Translation: Nếu không có bảo tàng, những trải nghiệm đắm chìm như vậy sẽ chỉ còn là những điểm ảnh trên màn hình.
8️⃣ While... (Contrastive Clause)
Structure: While + Subject + Verb, Subject + Verb
Meaning: Used to show contrast between two situations or ideas.
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: While the internet provides vast amounts of information, it cannot replace the tangible experiences and cultural significance that museums offer.
Vietnamese Translation: Trong khi Internet cung cấp lượng thông tin khổng lồ, nó không thể thay thế những trải nghiệm hữu hình và ý nghĩa văn hóa mà các bảo tàng mang lại.
9️⃣ Were it not for... (Conditional Inversion for Type 2)
Structure: Were it not for + noun, Subject + would + V (bare-infinitive)
Meaning: Expresses a hypothetical situation; similar to "If it were not for..."
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: Were it not for museums, generations would lose touch with their cultural heritage.
Vietnamese Translation: Nếu không có các bảo tàng, các thế hệ sẽ mất đi sự kết nối với di sản văn hóa của mình.
10️⃣ ...offers more than... (Comparison Structure)
Structure: Subject + offers more than + noun/phrase
Meaning: Indicates that something provides greater value or experience beyond what is typically expected.
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: Encountering the Mona Lisa at the Louvre Museum in Paris offers more than a glimpse of a famous artwork; it invites observers to witness the subtle details and mysteries of the painting firsthand.
Vietnamese Translation: Chiêm ngưỡng bức tranh Mona Lisa tại Bảo tàng Louvre ở Paris không chỉ đơn thuần là nhìn thoáng qua một tác phẩm nghệ thuật nổi tiếng; nó còn mời gọi người xem khám phá những chi tiết tinh tế và bí ẩn của bức tranh.
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