Phân tích"The best way for a country to prepare for the future is to invest more resources on the young people. Do you agree and disagree?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Đề thi giấy 23/9/2023)

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích"The best way for a country to prepare for the future is to invest more resources on the young people. Do you agree and disagree?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Đề thi giấy 23/9/2023)

The best way for a country to prepare for the future is to invest more resources on the young people. Do you agree and disagree?

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Dạng opinion essay thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé
• Dạng opinion essay, nếu theo hướng TOTALLY AGREE có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
    • Main idea: by allocating more revenues for the educational institutions, and directing resources towards the education of the young population, governments can ensure that the country will progress financially in the future. (IELTS TUTOR giải thích: investment in human resources is the most beneficial for a state)
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Young people, if educated adequately, will become the most powerful source of competitiveness of a country; therefore, will create greater value than what has been invested in them.>> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn   PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
        • It can be seen that the world is changing fast, which requires every country to quickly adapt to it, and in order to do so, a government need  rely on their young people, who are more flexible and creative, to quickly respond to unforseen challenges.
      • Example: Singapore has invested for decades in developing the quality of their education system as the core action in forming a competitive workforce; as a result, Singapore has developed to be one of the most attractive sites for education for not only the Singaporeans but also for people from other countries
  • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
    • Main idea: providing more funds for the health of the population under 30 years of age will make sure that future generations healthy.  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng động từ "invest" tiếng anh
      • Supporting idea:
        • Health is directly related to the country's economic growth, and the authorities should give priority to this sector in order to plan for the future.
        • The sedentary lifestyle and poor diet of today’s teenagers may cause an increase in lifestyle diseases such as hypertension, diabetes and high cholesterol in the coming years. 
        • This can be prevented by giving more opportunities for sports and a well-balanced diet.  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng động từ "CONSIDER" tiếng anh
      • Example: For instance, in Australia, the obesity rates among students have been dropping over the past 10 years since athletic activities have been added to their curriculum 

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