Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "The line graph below shows the production of paper, wood pulp and sawn-wood in the UK from 1980 to 2000." IELTS WRITING TASK 1(Đề thi IELTS 19/4/2023)
I. Đề bài
The line graph below shows the production of paper, wood pulp and sawn-wood in the UK from 1980 to 2000.
II. Kiến thức liên quan
IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn:
III. Phân tích
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- Overall:
- Paper and packaging was produced the most in three years surveyed.
- Paper and packaging showed overall growth over the years whilst the opposite was true for the other two categories >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng danh từ "growth" tiếng anh
- Body 1: Viết về paper & packaging
- In 1980, the global production of paper and packaging was around 230 million tonnes, which increased to 250 million tonnes a decade later and then surged to 350 million tonnes by 2000.
- Body 2: Viết về Sawn-Wood & Wood Pulp
- In 1980, sawn-wood production and wood pulp production stood at approximately 200 million tonnes and 160 million tonnes, respectively >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng & paraphrase "respectively"/ "respective"
- Sawn-wood production saw a significant decline to a low of 130 million tonnes in 2000 while wood pulp production showed only a slight decrease in 1990 (nêu số liệu) before recovering to slightly less than its initial figure.
- Overall:
IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:
The line graph illustrates the output volumes (English: the amount produced — Vietnamese: sản lượng) of paper and packaging, wood pulp, and sawn-wood in the UK from 1980 to 2000.
Overall, paper and packaging consistently topped the production chart (English: was always the most produced — Vietnamese: luôn dẫn đầu về sản lượng), exhibiting a steady upward momentum (English: gradual and continuous increase — Vietnamese: đà tăng ổn định), while the other two categories either declined or stagnated.
In 1980, paper-related output (English: total production of paper and packaging — Vietnamese: sản lượng liên quan đến giấy) was approximately 230 million tonnes, rising to 250 million tonnes in 1990 before soaring (English: increasing rapidly — Vietnamese: tăng vọt) to 350 million tonnes by the year 2000.>> tham khảo CẦN VIẾT & THU ÂM BAO NHIÊU BÀI ĐỂ ĐẠT 8.0 SPEAKING & 7.0 WRITING?
Conversely, sawn-wood output (English: production of sawn wood — Vietnamese: sản lượng gỗ xẻ) declined significantly from 200 million tonnes to 130 million tonnes over the two decades. Meanwhile, wood pulp manufacture (English: the process of producing wood pulp — Vietnamese: sản xuất bột gỗ) experienced a slight drop to around 150 million tonnes in 1990, followed by a modest rebound (English: small recovery — Vietnamese: hồi phục nhẹ), ending just below its initial figure by 2000.
New Vocabulary with explanations:
output volumes (sản lượng): the total amount produced.
Synonyms: production level, manufacturing volume, yield.
Antonyms: shortage, deficit, underproduction.
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: The graph compares the output volumes of three materials.consistently topped the production chart (luôn dẫn đầu về sản lượng): was always the highest producer.
Synonyms: led, dominated, ranked highest.
Antonyms: trailed, lagged, fell behind.
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: Paper and packaging consistently topped the production chart.steady upward momentum (đà tăng ổn định): gradual and continuous increase.
Synonyms: gradual rise, stable increase, sustained growth.
Antonyms: decline, drop, slump.
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: The category showed a steady upward momentum.paper-related output (sản lượng liên quan đến giấy): production related to paper and packaging.
Synonyms: paper manufacture, packaging production, paper output.
Antonyms: wood-based output, non-paper products.
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: Paper-related output increased steadily.soaring (tăng vọt): rising very quickly.
Synonyms: spiked, surged, rocketed.
Antonyms: plunged, dipped, sank.
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: Output soared to 350 million tonnes by 2000.sawn-wood output (sản lượng gỗ xẻ): production of wood cut into planks.
Synonyms: sawn timber production, processed wood yield, lumber output.
Antonyms: raw timber, wood pulp, uncut wood.
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: Sawn-wood output declined significantly.wood pulp manufacture (sản xuất bột gỗ): the process of producing pulp from wood.
Synonyms: pulp processing, cellulose production, pulp output.
Antonyms: packaging manufacture, metalwork, textile production.
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: Wood pulp manufacture showed a slight drop.modest rebound (hồi phục nhẹ): small recovery after a decline.
Synonyms: minor recovery, slight bounce back, limited resurgence.
Antonyms: sharp fall, further decline, stagnation.
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: Wood pulp experienced a modest rebound by 2000.
Difficult grammar structures and Vietnamese translations:
Relative clause with non-defining information
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "...output, which was approximately 230 million tonnes..."
→ Mệnh đề quan hệ không xác định dùng để bổ sung thông tin.
Dịch: sản lượng, khoảng 230 triệu tấn...Participle phrase
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "rising to 250 million tonnes in 1990 before soaring to 350 million tonnes..."
→ Cụm phân từ diễn tả hành động nối tiếp.
Dịch: tăng lên 250 triệu tấn vào năm 1990 trước khi tăng vọt lên 350 triệu tấn...Contrast using linking words like "conversely" and "meanwhile"
→ Liên từ chuyển ý chỉ sự đối lập hoặc đồng thời.
Dịch: ngược lại, trong khi đó...
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